Saturday, November 28, 2009

Eternia's Adventure under the earth

There was a village in the sea with a castle and a secret passageway to land. The people were fair and friendly. Except on man who stole children. This village was no ordinary village. This was a secret village. The sharks never attacked them because the children fed them.

The king was the most fair, he loved everyone. Except for the man who killed Stitches mom, who was a very important person in the village. He was imprisoned for the act after the king cut off his arm when they captured him.


The dark haired man, who stole children, almost stole a king's servant's child. But before he could steal the child the king showed up. The king said "I won't arrest you if you don't ever do this again." The dark haired man was grateful for a second chance and swore he would never steal children again.

Just then they saw a big meteor, it made a big hole in the earth. The ocean water disappeared into the hole when the meteor hit.

When they looked into the hole they found an undiscovered world under the earth's surface. They found talking animals! They got a rope and went down into the newly founded world.

"Look!" the king says. "Houses too!" "Ok, this place has two ways down, let's split up."
So, two men stayed with the king. The other two men went down to the talking animals. They all were barely saved from the liquid hot magma as it quickly moved up the lower levels of the city.

The king and his two helpers were able to save the newly discovered world's people from some evil talking animals. They discovered that the animals were plotting to kill the king and his men because over heard the animals talking about their plan. In the confusion of the attack, the neo pet animal knocked down one of the men. However, the king and his other servant were able to kill the animals before there were any deaths on the kings side.


They rescued the underworld people from certain destruction! Now they had proof of talking animals who lived under the earth. The brought their new friends up to the surface and continued to live in peace and harmony.



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